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critique for MoarVespenegas by CosmicUnicorn critique for MoarVespenegas by CosmicUnicorn
Critique for :iconmorevespenegas: of their piece, "Afternoon Nap"

The dappled light is what really makes the feeling of the image... and this should be repeated with the sky in-between the leaves.
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Tiger610 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:33< the one at the top is more jungle-like
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Soulymans-real-self Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, All i can say was that was excellent critiquing. 
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Kaloyan-Alett Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like both honestly.
The open look gives a feeling of being way out from the farm in a wide open field which is particularly nice.

The more crowded, original, version has this sweet "secret" feeling to it. Like we're peeking into a scene not meant to be seen. Deep inside the apple orchard in a place only these two know about where they can go to relax and get away from the pressure of work.

Since AJ is such a hard worker I don't think she would want to be seen napping in the middle of the day.
But that's my own views and like i said, I like both.
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VUmbral Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
m(-_-)m I bow to your insight.
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DatMarimbaPlayer Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very cool.
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MoreVespenegas Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the critique. It's an incredible difference with a few key changes, I can take a lot back from this.
Thanks again for doing the reddit AMA and this critique, it's been very informative and helpful.
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