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critique - Nelvakreby *CosmicUnicorn

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_{Critique of: [link] by ~Nelvakre

Sometimes I get the spontaneous urge to do in-depth critiques.

I like Nelvakre's painting a lot, but to try and type out my critique... ugh... Too many words. Painting is visual.
So I did this quick edit. Entire correction took maybe an hour.

List of edits:

-Changing the temperature of the scene from yellow to blue.
-Raised the sky to expand the scene and add scale (and add balance to the composition)
-More atmosphere to create scale
-Unified values
-Unified color
-Touched up Rarity a little to match her to the scene

EDIT: lightened the foreground a little extra.

And looking at it, I may have accidentally connected the ledge in the foreground to the mountain behind it... though perhaps it wasn't intended to be part of the same rock structure... Ohhhhhh the perils of painting over someone else's painting... it's hard to notice everything.
I suppose I wanted it connected so that it looks more like she just found the valley after walking through the mountains or whatever...
Oops.

Light is always the most important thing in a painting. Always pay attention to the light.

Peace.}

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=Jinolu Dec 14, 2012

you could charge 50$ for this XD

~AtomicWarpin Nov 26, 2012 Student Digital Artist

This is amazing, very good fixes.

~sqarishoctagon Jul 11, 2012

This is awesome! Thanks!

~scrumpychumpy Apr 27, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

you're just an awesome person for doing this, crappy. just thought i should let you know that.

*viwrastupr Apr 27, 2012

If you'd like, to satisfy that urge to do spontaneous critiques we've got a community of pony artists over on reddit: [link] that would be happy to have you for whatever random time you choose.

Spot on tutorial.

*CosmicUnicorn Apr 30, 2012

_{Subscribed.

I'll lurk and post. Don't have a lot of time these days, though.}

*beppodragon Mar 30, 2012

Your paintings are amazing! Keep it up!

!Harsadeur Jan 22, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

very helpful, actually, thanks

!Harsadeur Jan 22, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

special thanks for the flow > opacity tip

*da-andi Jan 21, 2012

Talking about constructive Critique: THIS would hit the Nail on the Head.

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